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Re: The Asylum
I like how you described everything very well. You did not make any mistake I could find except for one. "They were all wearing the same I noticed." It would ...
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Re: Paper Planes
Paper Airplanes By Charlie 08-06-09 Some paper airplanes fly far and some don't. In this article I will talk about 5 types of paper airplanes and their performance. I made ...
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Re: Portrait of a Puppy
I like your drawing. I think it would look better if you put the white spots on the dog in solid circles like you did with dirt under the flower ...
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Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
The worst book I ever read is probably Across Five Aprils. It is about a sixteen year old that fights for the Union even though he was a Confederate. I ...
Sep 30, 2009 -
Re: The life of a border collie (Chapter one)
My sister wanted me to put her story on this web site. In this chapter my sister is trying to explain the puppies life at our house very briefly. The ...
Sep 30, 2009 -
Re: The Nuclear Bomb 1945
Nice describing. The only problem I saw was you spelled harbor wrong. You should of spelled it harbor, but you spelled it "harbour. I have always wanted to know when ...
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: A wallpaper I made on photoshop.
Nice wallpaper. I just use the paint program to make a wallpaper that organizes everything. I put one letter every seven spaces and then I put the programs that start ...
Sep 25, 2009 -
Re: Cheetah
I can not draw that well but I am only 9. :twisted: :wink:
Sep 25, 2009 -
Re: Funny Picture
This is my border collie playing soccer. If you can see her face detailed enough you can see her tongue sticking out.
Sep 25, 2009 -
Re: The black Scorpian
Nice Writing. You described very well. The only problems I saw was that you wrote "Thank god the scorpion picked on me and spared my children." and you need to ...
Sep 25, 2009 -
Re: The Soccer Locker
The Soccer Locker It was a normal morning for Henry Muford. He woke up,got dressed ,ate his breakfast and hopped on the bus. When he got to school he had ...
Sep 24, 2009 -
Re: Luminescence: Part One - A Twilight Fanfic [POLL]
Sorry I must of read it wrong. :shock:
Sep 24, 2009 -
Re: Luminescence: Part One - A Twilight Fanfic [POLL]
I don't really like twilight that much, but you do describe everything very well. :) "the purr of a porsche enginge" Enginge is spelled engine and instead of purr it ...
Sep 23, 2009 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
I don't like Harry Potter, Eragon, or Twilight earthier.
Sep 23, 2009 -
Re: First Day Essay
Your doing really good for English 101. My mind wanders when I am writing, but sometimes it makes for good stories. "Experianced" is spelled experience. I start writing the same ...
Sep 23, 2009
